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To Start Off, This Is Okay. I Think You Drew Yourself Perfectly. But The Rest Are... Okay. The Person Next To You Looks A Little Derpy. And The Thumbs Aren't Drawn Very Well. And Why Is Everybody, Like Blushing? And The Shoes Are Not That Great. Sorry If I'm Being Harsh, I Know You Aren't That Good At Humans. I Like The Detail On The 2nd Person's Shirt. The Hair Is Pretty Good On All Of Them. The Hair Is Like, Under The Eye Of The Second Person. Altogether, This Is Okay. You Should Spend A Bit More Time On Your Work. I Know You Spent 2 Hours On This But, I Bet If You Spent 4 It Would Be Better. I'm Not Saying It's Bad It's Just... Meh.
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:iconbuonotomatoes:
um well i realize critiques are supposed to give help but honestly you didn't really say enough good things
so lets see good things about this are;
-Me

:I so um

also i was messing with styles, thats how the thumbs are supposed to be, and the one next to me was supposed to be derpy (god i hate saying that word)
And its not blushing, its a style

sorry if I'm getting really defensive but idk
after almost rage quitting and stuff i can't say this really helped, more like pissed me off.

Just saying this was fair to see what other people think about this critique and if it was fair or not to them/
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:icongonerforgood:
GonerForGood Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Sorry ^^;
I Was Just Trying To Tell You Some Stuff.
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:iconbuonotomatoes:
Ik that much,,,,,
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:icongonerforgood:
GonerForGood Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:iconsorryplz:
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:iconbuonotomatoes:
okyeahsorryioverreactedidothatalotoksorry
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:icongonerforgood:
GonerForGood Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
It's Fine ^^
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GonerForGood Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Cool.
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